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Description
A new training regimen is decided upon... and it doesn't work for anyone involved.
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To learn more about the UMMA, visit the website:
ummafff.x10.mx
To interact with the UMMA managers and see behind the scenes content from the other stables, visit the UMMA Managers Forum:
umma.createaforum.com
Comment and feedback are not only welcome... they're encouraged.
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This was great fun, again! It was a fantastic 'plan' (I think plans really) and worked great. Sometimes all we need is a push in a particular direction and sometimes that push is a direct challenge. Calling on the ol' tried and true The Enemy Of My Enemy Is My Friend routine (sort of, if you cock your head just right.... ) was great. The ol' feeding false information gag worked well also. Getting one or two of the fighters to help out was smart, probably how it would go in a close knit group like the RSI stable. And the kicker was getting the two of them to forget they were mad at each other by getting them thinking they started a riff between Richelle and Danni. Nicely done. The NCIS back of the head thwack on Emma was classic as was the little give and take about Emma's acting was fun. Overall I just loved this story. It was well thought out, but then again they always are.
I need to inject my only, and I mean only, downside here.
I look ahead and I see only one or two more stories and that saddens me. I know there are more coming sometime and I also know there will be those articles to read. Those are always fun to read and I'm sure it'll give me my fix, but I've come to enjoy the downtime of reading these stories you've crafted and the world you've created.
I guess what I'm saying is "chop chop"! 
It was a fantastic 'plan' (I think plans really) and worked great. Sometimes all we need is a push in a particular direction and sometimes that push is a direct challenge. Calling on the ol' tried and true The Enemy Of My Enemy Is My Friend routine (sort of, if you cock your head just right.... ) was great. The ol' feeding false information gag worked well also. Getting one or two of the fighters to help out was smart, probably how it would go in a close knit group like the RSI stable. And the kicker was getting the two of them to forget they were mad at each other by getting them thinking they started a riff between Richelle and Danni. Nicely done. The NCIS back of the head thwack on Emma was classic as was the little give and take about Emma's acting was fun. Overall I just loved this story. It was well thought out, but then again they always are. I need to inject my only, and I mean only, downside here.
I look ahead and I see only one or two more stories and that saddens me. I know there are more coming sometime and I also know there will be those articles to read. Those are always fun to read and I'm sure it'll give me my fix, but I've come to enjoy the downtime of reading these stories you've crafted and the world you've created.
I guess what I'm saying is "chop chop"!