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Here's a little story where the past tied into the present. When I originally wrote this, I kept the identity of the main character a secret... because I thought I was being mysterious. 
However, if you've read my earlier stuff, you'll know who it is.
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Comment and feedback are not only welcome... they're encouraged.
However, if you've read my earlier stuff, you'll know who it is.
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To learn more about the UMMA, visit the website:
ummafff.x10.mx
To interact with the UMMA managers and see behind the scenes content from the other stables, visit the UMMA Managers Forum:
umma.createaforum.com
Comment and feedback are not only welcome... they're encouraged.
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WOW!!!! Just...WOW! You're an amazing write and it's been a great disservice to myself to have waited so long to try out one of your stories! I definitely will be back for part two of this.
You're attention to detail is spot on and that's a huge asset. They say the devil's in the details, and that's especially true in writing fiction.
I love the way your style seems to drag us into the fight ourselves. It's like we're seeing and experiencing everything the poor red head (whom I assume is Richelle?) is experiencing.
Speaking of her, MAN, did she get worked like a heavy bag. Loved the parts with her trapped in the corner. That was nice
. I really liked that.
The ending was also surprising. I didn't expect her opponent to take care of her like that nor show her mercy in the ring. That shows that she's more than some ham-fisted thug and not a villain like I had originally assumed at the start of this.
Like what I'm seeing so far and I can't wait to dive into part two.
You're attention to detail is spot on and that's a huge asset. They say the devil's in the details, and that's especially true in writing fiction.
I love the way your style seems to drag us into the fight ourselves. It's like we're seeing and experiencing everything the poor red head (whom I assume is Richelle?) is experiencing.
Speaking of her, MAN, did she get worked like a heavy bag. Loved the parts with her trapped in the corner. That was nice
. I really liked that.The ending was also surprising. I didn't expect her opponent to take care of her like that nor show her mercy in the ring. That shows that she's more than some ham-fisted thug and not a villain like I had originally assumed at the start of this.
Like what I'm seeing so far and I can't wait to dive into part two.