10.4 Time to Regroup (PDF version)

Ive always loved the humor you inject into your stories, especially the interaction between Richelle and Danni.  I think these four chapter were really top shelf covering that ground.  Nice job.  As for these last two chapters I think I missed what I was supposed to see as far as how Richelle missed Alyson as a leader to begin with.  Its likely because it takes me so long to get through one of your chapters now because time on my end isn't what it once was.  They get broken up as I read them and I think I miss out on details.   I did find the conversation here fun to read.  The give and take between all the girls, how they built the teams, and how you went about distributing the dialog between the 4-5 of them is fantastic.  The fact that Aly wanted to build a team of young fighters was a brilliant idea and I liked that you are going to go forward with that idea.  The surprising twist at the end really caught me off guard.  As I've read through your various chapters I guess I never really thought of Danni as part of a team, but of course she would be.   You've probably said it 100 times and I'm sure I've read and comprehended it, but it just didn't hit me until now.  Great job, cant wait to move on to the next one.  Your world is really starting to form in my head now.  Thanks so much for sharing your work here.